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[FPS Performance Preloader]

Ingenuity

The word that takes an engineer to spell. Seriously though, this was not just a good idea, its something I have never seen before. This is useful not only for flash games but movies as well. You should send this preloader to the NG crew, because this is fantastic. Good job.

jjwallace responds:

i am working on a new version which looks nicer... i took the same workings as this one and revamped it... hmm the crew huh? maybe i will send it to them when i finish the polished version... i will probably upload the new version tommorrow

[Tank Raid]

Decent product, good effort

OK, I have some suggestions for improvement, lets start with those:

Make some background, so that we notice when we change level.
Add music
Add more score for killing the APC
Add more enemies
Make the Tank Tower turn slowly, instead of making it follow the aim perfectly, this makes it a lot harder and force you to calculate each shot. Maybe add a reload time also.

If you do that, you have a great game. The bad parts of this game is pretty much that it lacked these elements.

Peace.

InfernoNL responds:

Thanks for your feedback, I didn't add to much enemies at the start on purpose for people playing it for the first time, to not make it too hard.

But I think the beginning is too easy for too long, so I will upload a new version in a sec with a higher difficulty starting level.

[Path Follower 1.2]

It's been done...

Nothing new in the world of Crusor Moving games. Same, same, swuare blocks moving up and down... I mean, you could atleast have made an effort to make the "grey" as you put it, more visually appealing. And make a more entertaining crusor animation than a blue dot.

And why not try to think of a new obstale? Maybe a teleport thingy, or earthqueake/crusor shiver kind of thing?

neon-dude responds:

I'm not sure how a teleporter would work, but an earthquake machine sounds great! If I make a second I could incorporate that.

[Zombie Attack]

Put some more effort in it!

It seems you spent far too much time designing the menu, which was the only thing that acctually looked decent. And that was mostly thanks to the newground tank. The instructions were hard to read because the Ls looked like Zs, and the F like 7. Took me a while to dechiffer. The gameplay isn't bad, it's non existent im afraid. Try making a bigger arena and slow the zombies down so that it is possible to outrun them. And I didn't even find the easter egg, but unless it was an entirely new, upgraded version of this game, it wouldn't have helped your score.

Next time, try spending more time on making the game enjoyable. Slower zombies, more graphics (sticks? seriously), bigger arena. Maybe add some weapons? I mean, survival horror is fun, watching some black stickman trotting two steps to the left before a shoddy "score" table appears is however not.

Koeberto190 responds:

I started it really late so I didnt have much time to work on it, if I did, I would fix everything up, including:

Graphics
Gameplay
Power-ups
Different enemies
Easier
Boundries

I might work on it more and submit the new version, but I just wanted to submit something for halloween. But anyway, thanks for the highly constructive review, it helped a lot.

[Fantasy Female 5.0]

Another one

And it kicks as much ass as the others! The wings were cool, but a bit undetailed... Sorry :(

And also, there is still no cool weapons, like buring swords, or glass swords, or any sword at all!

Keep doing these, they rock!

Syrsly responds:

There will be weapons eventually... if I'm not too lazy to work on it. Still, you should check for newer versions of the game before posting reviews. Oh well...

[Fantasy Female 4.0]

Aah.. Loved 3.0, and this was even better!

But there isn't much new stuff though... No weapons yet, and no male.

And don't ad detail to breasts and vagina! Delete the newgrounds cheat!

hehe

Syrsly responds:

The NG cheat is actually necessary to add extra customization. Think of it as a virtual Barbie doll. XD

[Fantasy Female 3.0]

THIS WAS F***ING AWSOME!!!

This was the best Dressup Game I've ever played... and I've played almost everyone here on newgrounds, and at other sites as well... This is the best because you could do almost everything... And it wasn't focused at the "Anime chick without cloathes" concept... This was a dress-up instead of undress... You should do one with a male as well... maybe ad weapons, that would be cool!

Keep up the good work!

Syrsly responds:

My point exactly. Most guys just want to undress the girls, though. I'm just wanting to dress them up in scifi/fantasy clothing. I'll add jetpacks, capes, amulets, and even ear controls in later versions. I just decided to take a break from this project to work on my MMORPG.